One setting, one character on different days. Today’s writing exercise puts you into the mind of a person who is in the same place, same surroundings, on different days. Explore the variations possible as the day and time changes. The scene is a platform, deep underground, on the London Underground. This is a writing prompt from the Writers’ BLOCKbusters series.
First create the setting. Use the five senses to consider this place in 3D.
This is an everyday scene, predictable, familiar.
Create an outline of a character who visits this place regularly. Why are they there, how do they feel about it? Build up a picture of your character’s interaction with this place on an ordinary day.
Now put your character into this place and make one sense dominant above all others. Use it to dramatic effect – perhaps the smell of a commuter’s perfume, the sound of an alarm bell, the sight of something which is a surprise. Concentrate on this one sense until you can write no more. You might write a description piece, an action scene, an inner monologue – whichever seems best to you.
Repeat this exercise using a second sense.
And write a third version for a third sense.
Analyse how these three passages differ, what new things you learn about your character and the place, and what dramatic possibilities present themselves.
© ‘Writers’ BLOCKbusters’ by Sandra Danby
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